Friday, September 16, 2005

Extinction

Eyes of love fixed on a world that does not exist.Twisted words played to keep the dice rolling.It's own thorns are killing the rose, which lies in the hand that doesn't hold.
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10 comments:

Linda Jones Malonson said...

Tazeen when you do come back, you come back with a bang! So much is said in so few words --- how very profound!

5:39 AM
Rambler said...

how do u come up with such stuff! i envy your writing, girl!

1:44 PM
shooting star said...

intriguing.

10:26 PM
sirbarrett said...

I'm glad I rode my unicorn out here to see this. Great visual poem. I love the paradoxes.

1:51 PM
Snowbear said...

Sorry that I've been away for awhile; but it's wonderful to see you're still here. Blessed and Happy New Years!!!

1:57 PM
Pecos Blue said...

we all create our own fantasy and the world around us helps to keep it going. great post

9:42 AM
Manjari said...

a very nice couplet written by you.. god bless..

10:16 PM
Shahab said...

So much said in so less words ..! Great post .. and do come back soon ..

2:32 AM
Mythreya said...

so much you have told....in few words...
it was really good..

5:30 AM
Maithri said...

Poignant, touching and perfectly phrased.

Blessings of peace and love to you,

Maithri

4:00 PM

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